i woke up on the floor ina dark room, i was freezing. I tried to sit up, only to realize i was chained to a ring on the floor. was this another nightmare?? then, a door a few feet away from me opened a few feeet away from me opened letting in a little bit of light, along with some warmth.the light allowed me to see that my armor was gone and i was stripped of everthing but my bra and underwear.
" grab her and bring her out here!!" yelled a gray haired dwarf.
why could i understand them??
" yes, bring her to where all can see!!" the large firmilliar night elf called to the 2 humans unlocking my chains and grabbing me by each arm. they lead me into a large room, filled withpeople, all alliance. except for one, the undead i had seen in cross roads. they were talking about how good it was going to be. What was going to be good? and why couild i understand them?!
the night elf, holdong a copper pipe in his hand, spoke tot eh assembled alliance," now, we shall find out where the all powerful one is, well, the second one,for, after this, One shall be dead!!!" he yelled for all to hear.
all powerfuyl, who was he tlaking about? Darius, atari or daek, thatdrin??
" let the truth come!" he yelled to everyone, then turnign toward me he said" Now, this won't hurt.....bad.. if you tell us wher shameso is."
whos shameso?? i had never even heard of a shameso.
" i.. i don't know.. who h-"i sputtered. was this really dream? why could i really talk to them?
"LIAR!!!" he yelled, and everyone cheered. with the audience egging himon iwith there cheers, the night elf brought the pipe down n my back. pain races through my boby as the night elfbrutally pounded my back with the pipe. i was biting my tounge to keep from crying out in pain. he stopped and the cheering died down.
" tell me where he is!!!" he commanded
"i-i don't know wh-" i was cut off by the pipe landing on my back. i could feel the blood running down the sides of my body and my back. i couldn't hold back any longer. i let out a short cry, and tears ran down my face. i looked right into the eyes of the only person in that room that could help me, the undead sitting about 3 feet away. i looked into his eyes and , and realized he was truly eveil, because his eyes were filled with pure enjoyment, and he watched me being beaten.
everything went black, and the scene changed
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Sunday, June 15, 2008
excerpt form A Hunters Mark: nightmare
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 10:14 AM
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yay! poll! they make me happy! love this excerpt. keep them coming. hey, hope you don't mind but i did a little publicizing of this blog on my blog so my internet people can become addicted as i have! keep them coming. hey... y'all should start putting excerpts on quizzilla.com as well... major publicity!
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