Shameso here:
nuther pology.
rly sry, know you are hanging on my every word but i just dont know what to do!!
help me out, should they stay low and wait or go to battle??
should Darius wake up or stay asleep??
minor battle scene then huge end one or just go right to the huge end one??
wait i might have something with the minor scene....hmmmmmmm
give it a while to ferment
more later.
sryas!!
Tuesday, June 24, 2008
myb sumthing, idk sry!!
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 4:59 PM 1 comments
Thursday, June 19, 2008
Sorry
Sorry guys.. right now the writers at wartimecronicles.com are expirenceing technical difficulties wihtt he first book in the series... A hunters Mark.
pleze be considerate while we work oput the glitches in our brains and try to continue our book..
thank you very much
-- A hunters Mark Team
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 1:24 PM 0 comments
Monday, June 16, 2008
The Mage's Spell:Darius's Fate
A portal opened and a few seconds later a blood elf was thrown through. What was it with their friends and getting up early?
"5 more minutes......." Tyrinn grumbled, while searching for the snooze button that wasn't there.
Daek kicked him in the ribs, hard. He sat up.
"What the hell is wrong with you?!" He yelped.
"No," Daek said evenly, "You should be wondering what's wrong with him."
He gestured toward Darius. Tyrinn glanced over and then paled.
"What happened?" He gasped.
"He fell off a ferris wheel," I deadpanned, "What do you think happened?"
Tyrin looked closer for a minute and got to work. He gave us orders to help him. We listened, what else could we do?
"You," He said pointing at me, "Keep his blood supply up. You," pointing to Decimas, "Go get a pizza."
"Why?" Decimas asked
"Because i'm hungry," He said, "Now go!"
He concentrated for a while and the bleeding slowed, then stopped. I sat back, exhausted, and watched now.
He worked with amazing calm and speed, healing Darius. Before we knew it his shoulder was reattached to his arm and all that was left was a large scar.
Decimas came back and we all sat down to eat.
"Now what?" I asked hollowly.
"We let him sleep," Tyrinn said, "He needs to recharge, plus when he wakes up to find Ellyossa gone, he's gonna be pissed and will probably hurt himself worse. So, let him sleep."
"So," Daek asked, "He will be okay?"
"After a while," Tyrinn shrugged, "He's gonna have to be careful with that arm, otherwise yes. Perfectly fine. Now i want to know something," He turned to me, "How exactly did this happen?"
"Yeah," Daek agreed, "And where is my sister?"
I shook my head. I really didn't want to go back there. It was horrible but I knew I had to. I owed them.
"Okay," I started, "But first you tell me what happened before Me and Decimas came along. We need to understand this."
"Fine," Daek said, "Well it started with Ellyossa stopping this one........."
There. now you know Darius's fate. happy now?? pleez review.
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 4:39 PM 2 comments
Sunday, June 15, 2008
Next Excerpt from the Mage's Spell
Atari left. We all looked at Darius wondering what to do next.
"Well," Decimas finally said, "Let's try and stop the bleeding."
Me and him concentrated on that while Daek paced and listened for Atari. About a half hour later Atari returned, alone.
"She won't come," He reported, "She wouldn't even see me!"
"Damn," Daek said, "What do we do now?"
"Do you think Tyrinn would come?" Atari speculated.
"Anything's worth a try," Daek said, "Tell him he's needed right away. If he asks why, tell him there are a bunch of injured hot chicks lying around. If that doesn't work, force him through a portal."
Atari nodded and left again. At this point we had the bleeding slowed but not stopped. Now all we could do was replenish his blood supply.
What about Ellyossa? That was my next main thought. We couldn't do anything with Darius like this, but what about after he was well? How are we going to save her and.......Oh My God, Shostion!!!! We forgot about Shostion!!!
"Guys," I said, "What about Shostion?"
"Who?" Daek said, sounding like he just came back to the present.
"Shostion!" I said, "They still have him!"
"What can we do right now?" Decimas said, "We're kind of stuck here."
He was right, of course. We were stuck. Almost everyone was hurt and we 48 hours to hand over all Horde weapons and lands. We were screwed.
not very long but there you go...pleez review!!
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 3:16 PM 1 comments
excerpt form A Hunters Mark: nightmare
i woke up on the floor ina dark room, i was freezing. I tried to sit up, only to realize i was chained to a ring on the floor. was this another nightmare?? then, a door a few feet away from me opened a few feeet away from me opened letting in a little bit of light, along with some warmth.the light allowed me to see that my armor was gone and i was stripped of everthing but my bra and underwear.
" grab her and bring her out here!!" yelled a gray haired dwarf.
why could i understand them??
" yes, bring her to where all can see!!" the large firmilliar night elf called to the 2 humans unlocking my chains and grabbing me by each arm. they lead me into a large room, filled withpeople, all alliance. except for one, the undead i had seen in cross roads. they were talking about how good it was going to be. What was going to be good? and why couild i understand them?!
the night elf, holdong a copper pipe in his hand, spoke tot eh assembled alliance," now, we shall find out where the all powerful one is, well, the second one,for, after this, One shall be dead!!!" he yelled for all to hear.
all powerfuyl, who was he tlaking about? Darius, atari or daek, thatdrin??
" let the truth come!" he yelled to everyone, then turnign toward me he said" Now, this won't hurt.....bad.. if you tell us wher shameso is."
whos shameso?? i had never even heard of a shameso.
" i.. i don't know.. who h-"i sputtered. was this really dream? why could i really talk to them?
"LIAR!!!" he yelled, and everyone cheered. with the audience egging himon iwith there cheers, the night elf brought the pipe down n my back. pain races through my boby as the night elfbrutally pounded my back with the pipe. i was biting my tounge to keep from crying out in pain. he stopped and the cheering died down.
" tell me where he is!!!" he commanded
"i-i don't know wh-" i was cut off by the pipe landing on my back. i could feel the blood running down the sides of my body and my back. i couldn't hold back any longer. i let out a short cry, and tears ran down my face. i looked right into the eyes of the only person in that room that could help me, the undead sitting about 3 feet away. i looked into his eyes and , and realized he was truly eveil, because his eyes were filled with pure enjoyment, and he watched me being beaten.
everything went black, and the scene changed
hope u liked.. pleze comment and rate!!
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 10:14 AM 1 comments
Excerpt from The Mage's Spell
Shameso here...........heres a excerpt from my book.........
Manaroth 3:16 X
I opened the door and flew down the door the stairs. Daek, Atari, and Decimas looked at me expectantly, waiting for news.
"Go get Darius," Was all I could manage in a shaky voice, I looked at them, "NOW!!"
Atari shrugged and left. I went to the table and sat down with my head in my hands.
"Shameso," Daek started, "What happened? Where's my sister? And whay do we need to ghet Darius?"
"She was captured," I said in a flat voice, "So was Shandowa. Darius, Darius is....."
I trailed off, fighting the wave of nausea. Thankfully Atari came back with Darius, saving me from that question.
He looked horrible. He was white as the bone protruding from his shoulder. The blood was still gushing from the wound.
"Get Quesalista," Daek said hollowly to Atari, "Quickly."
so...........whatchya think???? not very interesting, but nice hanging ending for ya=]
more later
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 9:58 AM 3 comments
Saturday, June 14, 2008
heres the down low
OK so.. i made this blog so me and harper can post segments of our books on here so all of you get a preview.. to the new, amazing series.............The Wartime Chronicles...
i hope you guys enjoy our segments and you can check out our personal blogs at www.carsicklife.blogspot.com.. or www.doortomycrazymind.blogspot.com....
feel free to comment, rate, or even ask questions...........
we thank you for all of your support, and pleze read our books when and if they are ever published!!
ellyossa.. and Shameso
Posted by Lizz L Lindsay at 6:22 PM 1 comments